Rough Cut

Because our video has developed into a completely different video from our animatic I feel I should go over the narrative briefly to make sure the message has got across:
Their are two kinds of zombies in our video; social zombies (e.g. our protagonist) and stereotypical zombies (the monsters our protagonist sees normal people as when she sees them as immoral or frightening). Some could interpret this as our main character as suffering from anxieties and/or depression as she fails to see the humanity in people in every day situations and seems isolated from all the other people in our video. This is why after seeing herself as a monster she decides to take medication. Our ending could also be interpreted in different ways, she could be taking medication for her mental disorders or she could be overdosing on medication.  
We reinforced the ideas we had about being trapped by incorporating bars and fences throughout our video. An audience may not pick up on this but will hopefully pick up the subliminal message of the girl being trapped in society or trapped in her own head. 

For a rough cut we feel our video looks pretty good. All our edits are smooth (if perhaps simple) and our story is clear and easy to understand. We feel our video lays a good foundation for our final cut and there is not too much we need to improve on. We just have to work to make our video look more preferential by working into it more, using the audience research we receive from this cut to perfect the work we already have. This may evolve re shooting some scenes or even scraping some parts entirely but we are sure it will be worth all the effort for a high quality outcome.